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[凌辱虐情] 【美妻，沦为便器的公用女人】

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场景设计和描写都很带感，尤其喜欢后半段聚众直播/摄影的肉戏部分，这种视角看着确实爽，不过还有个小建议，女主的描写代词可以在老婆和名字（甚至忘了叫啥）之间换着来，不然通篇下来老婆老婆看着都有点不认识这两个字了
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