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[其他作者] 【妻殇】第一部 家庭教师 02

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用药虽有些卑鄙，但对于女主角这种养尊处优的贵妇也不失为一种好手段。毕竟家庭的背景对于她来说要心甘情愿的出墙还是有所顾虑的，这种手段我个人是认同的。接楼上说的，心里描写要刻画的细致一些，多设置一些刺激的场景，把她挣扎的过程完整详细的呈现出来！希望楼主尽情发挥，向众狼友敬上一部佳作！
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