yanjun88 发表于 2010-1-13 17:06   全显示 1楼
全部看完了，再过来回复的，感觉作者的这个题材可以当做长篇来写，不过就这几个章节来看，细节方面还是有些可以琢磨的，因为赵姐和男主角只经过简单的几次SEX就确立了关系，而且感觉赵姐为什么欣赏男主角这点的安排还是不够好，有点迷糊，至于主任作者则是尽可能的将其形象进行降低，有点故意之嫌，当然了这篇文章无论从各方面来看绝对是一篇好文，虽然短了，可惜了，但是留给我们的还是值得玩味的
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